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Welcome to your nightmare.
This is the price of evil.
The sins that you've commited
and the darkness in your soul
have brought you here.
God ain't on your side anymore.
Your relationship with him was severed
when you rejected his commandments.
Nothing will stop the madness.
Your crimes haunt you.
But the trigger won't save you.
So now they ink numbers in your soul.
Just a puppet in the devil's show.
Just a slave in the hellfire.
This is the place where
Right is wrong
And wrong is right.
Pain needs no reason here.
This is your fate.
Such a tragic
turn of events.
No way out.
This is where you belong.
I'm your fucking nightmare.
another poem
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MeghanxMassacre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this, sounds exactly how I would write it! Such dark, morbid feelings. Great work!
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:iconshadowmacer66:
shadowmacer66 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :D
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shalorah Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Sounds a lot like Nightmare by Avenged Sevenfold... 0.0 was this intentional?
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:iconshadowmacer66:
shadowmacer66 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was based off it, so yes it was intentional.
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shalorah Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ah cool
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